Thursday, March 29, 2007

Patience

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She was discouraged
She was losing hope
She is one who cannot wait long for anything in life

She felt tired of waiting
She felt languid
She felt that nothing is worser than waiting

Waiting for something that she deserved
For something important
For something life changing

The voice saw her struggle
The voice saw the journey
The voice is one who sees the end of the journey

The voice consoled
The voice tried to reason
The voice advised Patience

Patience to wait for something that is to be hers
For something irrefutable
For something life-impacting

She listens to that voice
She finds solace in the voice
She hasn't lost hope, not yet...

5 comments:

Sudipta Chatterjee said...

"If the sun by the cloud is hidden a bit,
If the welkin shows but gloom,
Still hold on yet a while, brave heart,
The victory is sure to come."
-- Swami Vivekananda

Velocity said...

So., Its the struggle n the Voice again.. Its wonderful tat u express urself yet conceal things., i like it :)

As it's Said..,
"Tough Times don't last long ,
but tough people do.."

Princess Banter said...

True that -- sometimes we struggle to keep our patience going and thoughts flirt with us whether or not something is still worth it. Somehow, at the end of the day, it usually always is worth it. Too bad patience isn't a commodity -- it's quite priceless!

Arun said...

the more u struggle, u can better appreciate the success.

alpine path said...

Sudipta, hope she holds on. Lets wait and see! Btw, the quote is apt. Thanks! :)

Velocity, the entire blog is a way of expression. This is yet another attempt, that's all. I'm glad you like it.

Princess Banter, you are right about patience. I hope what she(in the fiction) wants is worth her wait. Lets see how things unfold. I'm intrigued too! :)

Arun, rightly said! But, don't some things need too much of a struggle?